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All the Same, It’s Totally Different
This week, I had one of my math classes (with students who are a bit lower functioning) doing a worksheet that involved directions like “Go right 3,” and, “Go up 4.” As usual, when they asked what to do, I asked them to read what it said.
Here’s the thing. In ASL, there are three different signs for “right.” There’s “right vs. left,” “right vs. wrong,” and “you have the right to remain silent.” Kids that are strong readers will figure out from context which it means, but five out of six kids signed, “Go right-as-in-not-wrong.” (When I pointed out the second instruction said “Go up,” they figured it out and felt silly.)
So, Thing #1 to think about as a writer (particularly writing for kids): Words have multiple meanings. Make sure the specific use is clear.
I hate to mention highway signs and driving again, but seriously, I spend a LOT of time in my car. And although it’s been a mild winter, it’s winter nonetheless, and that brings out the ice signs.
Have you ever noticed there’s no standard for those signs? Especially if you drive in different states, there’s a whole variety out there. Lots of ways to say essentially the same thing, but I’ll assert that some are better than others.
ICY ROAD/BRIDGE
This one is the simplest, but perhaps my least favorite. More than 50% of the time, it’s a lie. Too often, I pass these signs and think, “Yeah, it could be icy … if it weren’t bone-dry and 40 degrees!”
ICY CONDITIONS MAY EXIST
More accurate, but my snarky self thinks, “Yeah, I can tell you for sure they exist in Antarctica. Are you talking about here?” There’s just something overly complicated about it, making it sound like the politically correct version of the sign.
BRIDGE ICES BEFORE ROAD
Oh, look, a physics lesson in a road sign! This one isn’t too bad on the surface, but hey—maybe the road is icy, too, in which case this sign is kind of pointless.
ROAD/BRIDGE MAY BE ICY
Ah, this is the one I like. It says what it needs to say simply. It doesn’t over- or understate things. I wish they would use this one everywhere they need such signs.
Thing #2 to think about as a writer: There are many ways to say the same thing. Sometimes the “pretty” way is best for what we need to accomplish. But sometimes it’s more important that it’s functional and accurate. Don’t be afraid of clarity.
What are some of the “same but different” conundrums you’ve run into? (Don’t get me started on the different ASL signs for “run” …)
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Comments Off on All the Same, It’s Totally DifferentLooking for Logic
There is some debate about whether any unpublished writer is qualified to critique the work of another. When it comes to genre-specific conventions or highly technical aspects, maybe not. But other areas are fair game.
I know not every writer is also a math teacher. (Okay, hardly any are.) Still, any literate person should be able to identify where logic fails — things that make you go, “Huh?”
If these show up in my writing, I hope someone would point them out for me. All examples have been made up by me, though I’ve seen similar in my own writing and others’.
Continuity Errors
With an effort, Grandpappy lowered his aching bones to sit in the comfort of his rocking chair.
[5 lines later, during which Grandpappy does not stand up]
The doting granddaughter supported him by the arm so he could sit in the chair his father had lovingly crafted so many years ago.
Being unemployed was doing a number on Stella’s self-esteem.
[a chapter later, during which Stella does not get a new job]
Stella supposed being kidnapped by aliens was a satisfactory reason for missing work.
Contradictory Language
Before he even began considering alternate transportation, Trent developed a variety of jetpacks, maglev skis, and hovercars.
[Pretty sure Trent was considering alternate transportation when he came up with those Jetsons-style contraptions.]
“If you want this done right, I’m your man,” Freddie said humbly.
[Do I have a different definition of “humble” lying around?]
Any other examples of things that make you go, “Huh?”